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Today we are writing continuing the BFG recount as a class but we will work on it section by section. This is the section you are writing in your own words today:


Next, I dashed up the road like a cheetah but I could feel the girl squirming around violently in my bag. I felt terrible but I had panicked because she had seen me. No human has ever seen me before! Seconds later, I raced through the moonlit fields, leaped over the hedges in my way and galloped over a dozen rivers until I finally reached my gigantic, dim and mysterious cave.


Resources to use:

1. Box Plan you have created

2 Setting description you have created


Success Criteria:


1. Time conjunctions (Next, then, after that)

2. First person (I, me, my)

3. Past tense (ran, leapt, sprinted etc)

4.Commas in a list (green, luscious and vast meadow)

5. Expanded noun phrases (The tall trees)