Today you are editing your piece of writing. Here are your instructions:
1. Check full stops and capital letters
2. Add time conjunctions - are they at the start of your paragraphs? Are they used throughout?
3. Find a noun - can you add an adjective in front of it? Could you add more than one and use commas in a list.
4. Find a verb - is it in the past tense? Is it powerful? Could you swap it for a better one?